Let's Fly (Repost from #1)

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Denise

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0 posted 1999-12-26 12:18 PM

Let’s traipse among the stars tonight
Come dance with me ’till dawn’s new light
Let’s waltz as one beneath the moon
-Come hastily – for dawn wakes soon.

Come sing a song with me, my Love
Pure harmony to rise above
The deaf’ning din that sure abounds
-’Till we but hear love’s sweeter sounds.

Let’s fly together you and I
Above the clouds – let’s soar so high
Transcending mountain peaks – each one
-’Till twilight’s nigh and day is done.

Come dance with me, Beloved, do
From this day on – ’till time is through
Let’s soar above life’s raging shore
-And sing love’s sweet song – evermore.

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Denise

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1 posted 1999-12-26 12:21 PM

This is truely great Denise.....It read like a dance to me......Soft and gentle.....and with style

Share what you are for you are what you share

Sally S.
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2 posted 1999-12-26 12:28 PM

Wow, Denise. I thought the second stanza was my favorite but as I read it again, I noticed how wonderful they all were!! Well done!

Martie

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3 posted 1999-12-26 01:07 AM

Lets traipse among the stars--I love that image--the whole poem was lovely.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Severn
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4 posted 1999-12-26 02:15 AM

Wonderful, wonderful - again...

K

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5 posted 1999-12-26 12:35 PM

I like this...it's quite beautiful

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-12-26 12:42 PM

Very beautiful, Denise, I agree with Martie.
Liz

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7 posted 1999-12-26 12:51 PM

It's even better this time, Denise.

Denise

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8 posted 1999-12-26 03:30 PM

Thank you, First Knight, Sally, Martie, Severn, Ruth, Elizabeth and Balladeer for reading and for your kind comments! I'm glad you all liked it!

Denise

Elizabeth

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9 posted 1999-12-26 09:08 PM

Let's trip the light fantastic-lovely, Denise. I for one would love to traipse among the stars.

Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

Denise

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10 posted 1999-12-26 10:43 PM

Thanks Elizabeth! Me too! hehehehehe....well at least we can dream!

Denise

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11 posted 2005-04-15 05:09 AM

sounds good to me

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12 posted 2007-11-12 04:19 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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