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Denise
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0 posted 1999-12-26 12:18 PM


  
Let’s traipse among the stars tonight
Come dance with me ’till dawn’s new light
Let’s waltz as one beneath the moon
-Come hastily – for dawn wakes soon.

Come sing a song with me, my Love
Pure harmony to rise above
The deaf’ning din that sure abounds
-’Till we but hear love’s sweeter sounds.

Let’s fly together you and I
Above the clouds – let’s soar so high
Transcending mountain peaks – each one
-’Till twilight’s nigh and day is done.

Come dance with me, Beloved, do
From this day on – ’till time is through
Let’s soar above life’s raging shore
-And sing love’s sweet song – evermore.


8/99




 Denise



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1 posted 1999-12-26 12:21 PM


This is truely great Denise.....It read like a dance to me......Soft and gentle.....and with style  

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Sally S.
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2 posted 1999-12-26 12:28 PM


Wow, Denise.  I thought the second stanza was my favorite but as I read it again, I noticed how wonderful they all were!!  Well done!
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3 posted 1999-12-26 01:07 AM


Lets traipse among the stars--I love that image--the whole poem was lovely.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

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4 posted 1999-12-26 02:15 AM


Wonderful, wonderful - again...

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5 posted 1999-12-26 12:35 PM


I like this...it's quite beautiful  
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-12-26 12:42 PM


Very beautiful, Denise, I agree with Martie.
Liz

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7 posted 1999-12-26 12:51 PM


It's even better this time, Denise.
Denise
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8 posted 1999-12-26 03:30 PM


Thank you, First Knight, Sally, Martie, Severn, Ruth, Elizabeth and Balladeer for reading and for your kind comments! I'm glad you all liked it!        

 Denise



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9 posted 1999-12-26 09:08 PM


Let's trip the light fantastic-lovely, Denise. I for one would love to traipse among the stars.  

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes



Denise
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10 posted 1999-12-26 10:43 PM


Thanks Elizabeth! Me too! hehehehehe....well at least we can dream!  

 Denise



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11 posted 2005-04-15 05:09 AM


sounds good to me
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12 posted 2007-11-12 04:19 PM


Enjoyed

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