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Kiwi
Junior Member

since 1999-12-24

Posts 10

0 posted 1999-12-25 04:56 PM

Sorry if this is really rough....I just wrote down what I feel and wel...this is how it turned out...

Just to tell you....

To just come out and say things...
It is so hard to do
But you just come out and say things...
It is just to easy for you..

I want to tell you that I love you
But I can't find the words
But I will close my eyes
And let my heart lead the way

I told you I love you
And I got no response
I told myself this would happen
I fell to hard too fast

If only I had waited
If only I had knew
You didn't fell that way yet
The way that I do

you told me things would not change
but no matter what they do
Thing are just to aquard
Between me and you........

Georgia
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 32

1 posted 1999-12-25 05:09 PM

Lovely poem...good work

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

2 posted 1999-12-25 06:55 PM

Never fails to amaze me how we can't find the words we want to say to someone, yet can express it in poetry. You said this so well, and that's why poetry is so beautiful.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-12-25 07:52 PM

Very well expressed Kiwi

Well Done!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Kiwi
Junior Member

since 1999-12-24

Posts 10

4 posted 1999-12-25 10:54 PM

Thank you all very much for replying to my poem. I wasn't quiet sure if poetry was for me but now I know it is!! Thank you!!

littleJas
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 39
Australia

5 posted 1999-12-26 08:33 AM

Very good poem, I liked it

Beri
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 149

6 posted 1999-12-26 11:41 AM

Kiwi, this was wonderful and quite expressive. I think poetry can be for anyone if they have some thoughts they'd like to express. Poetry is a great outlet for just about anything, I'm glad you've found the use for it!

If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-04-15 05:11 AM

good poem, even though you thought it was rough

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-11-12 04:19 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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