Open Poetry #4 |
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A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas, And morning slowly rises with a yawn. Inside the room, a smell of burning candles Is quickly mixed with freshness of the dawn. Just hours ago, the stars were gazing in Right through window’s icy, silver mesh, And warmth was penetrating through the skin, When spirits met outside their fervent flesh. Two lips were locked in an eternal kiss. Their hungry eyes just seemed to bond them. The ceiling shook from moans of bliss, As ancient clay snowed down upon them. And now this house, like a gallery of art, Preserves that night, contains my heart. < !signature--> I fell in love and kept on falling [This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-24-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Master! What a lovely picture you have painted! Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Denise! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is such a beautiful piece Master... and have a Very Merry Christmas and Joyous New Year.... ![]() A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Pepper and I wish the same to you! Happy HOlidays! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master - Such a lovely work to see on Christmas Eve. May yours be merry. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Marge, I wish Happy Holidays also! |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a lovely poem-and it really is a nice picture too! Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Elizabeth, glad you enjoyed it! |
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