Open Poetry #4 |
Cinquain Medley-challenge from DvlishImp |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Definitely an interesting form my friend, definitely interestin! It carries the potential which you used well here of portraying power! |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
This is an interesting writing style. I love it! --A Little Fairy-- |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cinquain Emotion showing love, laughter, joy poetry in a format Interesting [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is good. . .it's nice to see people experimenting with new forms. . . I like this. . .powerful words. . . Very good my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great medley, Dream! I enjoyed these! Denise |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I hope and dream on day I too, will learn more about these interesting forms. I like this. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
AHA! I've been trying to find something on this form of poetry for a while, but couldn't remember what it was called! Thanks, Dream. Loved the one on drugs. So true. Too true. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very interesting |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis a child's format I know but 'twas fun. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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