Cinquain Medley-challenge from DvlishImp

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 1999-12-23 04:53 AM

Drugs
Deadly Profit
Kills, Poisons,Warps
Addiction seduces our youth.
Death

Love
Pain, Joy
Comforts, Hurting, Embraces
Love brings me peace.
Paradox

Crevat
Black, Silk
Accents, Adorns, Buckling
Crevats are vintage clothing.
Tie

Clock
Keeps Time
Ticks, Awaken, Frustration
Only time will tell.
Necessary

©1999 DreamEvil

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Christopher

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since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-12-23 05:29 AM

Definitely an interesting form my friend, definitely interestin! It carries the potential which you used well here of portraying power!

Fairy Colours
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Sunrise,Fl,US

2 posted 1999-12-23 10:07 AM

This is an interesting writing style. I love it!

--A Little Fairy--

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-12-23 11:22 AM

Cinquain
Emotion showing
love, laughter, joy
poetry in a format
Interesting

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 12-23-1999).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 1999-12-23 12:16 PM

This is good. . .it's nice to see people experimenting with new forms. . . I like this. . .powerful words. . .

Very good my friend. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Denise

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5 posted 1999-12-23 10:23 PM

Great medley, Dream! I enjoyed these!

Denise

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

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Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 1999-12-24 12:28 PM

I hope and dream on day I too, will learn more about these interesting forms. I like this.

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12

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Honea Path, SC USA

7 posted 1999-12-24 02:09 AM

AHA! I've been trying to find something on this form of poetry for a while, but couldn't remember what it was called! Thanks, Dream. Loved the one on drugs. So true. Too true.

It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 1999-12-24 09:52 AM

Very interesting

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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9 posted 1999-12-24 05:57 PM

'Tis a child's format I know but 'twas fun.

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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