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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-12-23 05:59 PM


It's hell to say I gotta go,
Hope ya all remember old Toe.
It's been so grand, my memories are great,
Leaving ya all is something I hate.

I've met such dear friends,
so many talented folks,
and I've only replied,
With silly-assed jokes.

But from my old heart,
I want ya to know,
You've all meant a bunch,
To this old worn out Toe.

My health's been a bitch,
My days been so long,
Nuthin's gone right,
It's all gone wrong.

Except for this place,
The love you've all shown,
It's put a smile on my face,
More than you've known.

So many talents,
Too many to name,
Balladeer and the crazies,
And the "Justin' sanes.

I pray that you all,
Have Holidays so fine,
that you prosper and flourish,
After nineteen ninety nine.

Let's all start out a'new,
Take care of the many,
The folks that have little,
Let's give them plenty.

Ya don't realize,
What it's like to be poor,
We have so much,
We don't need any more.

A simple gift giving,
Whether gifts or ourselves,
Can bring happiness to many,
To others brings wealth.

We all have computers,
And this wonderful site,
Some will have nothing,
On this Christmas night.

Can ya imagine a child,
With a mother so broke,
That a meal is a present,
And that ain't no joke.

Some of you have,
A family that cares,
Others have nothing,
To enjoy with or share.

So remember those that,
Are less fortunate than us,
Share your love and your wealth,
Give one a  Christmas.


This is my last "poor" attempt to a poem....for probably quite a long time....I've enjoyed all of you...all the jokes, the fun, the heartache, the sadness, the illness and just all the great fellowship I've found here.....Hopefully I can visit now and then....To all the "newcomers"....you've discovered gold my friends....A treasure beyond compare....Folks that care, and share and just bare their souls...To all you other "alumni" here....you've been great...a blessing...and great great friends to me....I haven't replied to all of you fine folks, for this I am sorry.....But to those of you that know me at all..ya know how deeply I care for you and this site...It's been just fantastic....I guess if I had to pick my favorites yanno it would be Balladeer and LongJohn...cuz they're such nuts....and I miss Lucie terribly...she's a damn genius....WhiteDove's been an angel to me, as has so many others....and I think my "ribbon" would run outta ink if I were to list all of you....You've all been so kind and just a blessing to me....I've been through surgeries, legal problems, death threats and many other things you all know nothing about with the exception of maybe Rainbow and dear Suthern.....but I have appreciated and cherished all of you...Please have a wonderful Holiday...keep this place going now ya hear?..It's a "God-send" yanno?.....Old Ron has done real good don't ya know?......Yall behave, and keep all this great poetry and love amongst yourselves going forever...Okay?...Luv ya all.....Toerag......


© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
1 posted 1999-12-23 06:15 PM


Darling....I will love you whatever you do, whoever you are, because to me, you have the finest heart, the gift of laughter and I just love you as do we all...You're special kid!

HUSG

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-12-23 06:16 PM


Toe, sir we are not going anywhere! You will find us right here...keep in touch if you can.. do you know smoke signals? Take care!  

Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 1999-12-23 06:18 PM


WoW Toe!
You really DO have a heart!
Hey man, we'll miss you here! Things won't be the same without you!
I hope you have good luck and peace in your life. Live well and be good!

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 1999-12-23 06:22 PM


A great "last attempt"
It will sure be different without you. Please do tune in now and then
Good luck
Liz

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 1999-12-23 06:23 PM


Toerag,I wish you luck peace and Joy throughout your days. It's been a pleasure reading your poetry. You will be missed!!
Take care. Merry Christmas. Hope to seeyou back soon.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

6 posted 1999-12-23 06:50 PM


Take care. Was a pleasure to read your poetry.  You can learn a lot about a person by how he or she expresses themselves.  You would definately fall into the good people category.  Your "poor" attempts at poetry contain a wealth of gold hidden therein.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
7 posted 1999-12-23 07:18 PM


What more can I see after all these wonderfull words ? Maybe THANK YOU for bringing so many smiles on my face with your poetry and wherever you are this Christmas, I hope it will be full of peace and love.

Munda : )

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
8 posted 1999-12-23 07:23 PM


Toe...check your email before you go!

You'll be missed for sure
there is no doubt
For laughter abounds
When Toerag's about

Your poetry is beauty
it's never poor
It's received at Passions
with an open door

One thing I pray
you'll always know
No matter what
We love you Toe  

Merry Christmas, and all the best in the New Year for you.


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

9 posted 1999-12-23 08:40 PM


You will surely be missed...come back when you can...we'll be waiting.    Take care and God bless you.

 Denise



Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
10 posted 1999-12-23 09:49 PM


Great Big Holiday Hugs....Toe...
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
11 posted 1999-12-23 09:56 PM


Wiping tears! Man, I sure am gonna miss you terribly!!!  I'm glad you've come here and your attempts certainly aren't poor ones Toe!
They are heartfelt and wonderful!  I will continue to pray for you buddy that things get better for you! I've had one terrible year too.  You will be in my prayers and my thoughts, for God knows your heart and it's a beautiful one!  God bless you always and come back to us soon!  Love ya!
Merry Christmas ol' buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas


Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
12 posted 1999-12-23 10:05 PM


Toe -
You have brought laughter,
you've brought smiles ...
I trust they're enough
to last for a while.

Know that you go
with a piece of my heart.
I pray for your health
and a fresh start.

Return when you will
and continue to quip ...
you're something else
when it comes to the fast lip.

God bless you, Toe.
Love ya ... yanno? ~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
13 posted 1999-12-23 11:50 PM


Well now, I hope you won't be away too long! What will I do when I need a good chuckle?  
Warm holiday wishes, dear Toe. Take care and get back here as soon as you can.  We'll keep your seat warm.  Or..um..someone will, I'm sure!  

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
14 posted 1999-12-24 12:40 PM


Toe, there's nothing I can say here. I'm putting these words down so that you know I read your piece, as I do all of them, but what I feel towards you and our friendship makes it impossible to say goodbye. It would be so impossible to describe what your presence here has meant to me personally so I won't even try. I'll keep the light in for ya!
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
15 posted 1999-12-24 05:20 PM


Dear Toe... There's no such thing as "just another poem" from you... for it's always "just another treasure." Even now, when circumstances are pulling you away from a place that has meant so much to you, you're directing our attention towards those who need our help. There are so very few people through the course of my life that I can say without hesitation "I'm a better person for knowing you." You, my love, are top of that brief list.

Whatever roads you take, my friend, I pray your every step is blessed and that your every day be full of happiness, peace, love and laughter.

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
16 posted 1999-12-24 05:37 PM


You will be missed around here Toe.  Take care and may peace and laughter be in your life.  Hope to see you back here soon.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

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