Open Poetry #4 |
Now And Always I Love You (Acrostic) |
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Now and always Our love will be With open hearts And feelings free Now and always Day after day As time decays Lover's we'll stay With open arms And kisses sweet You and I will Share lives complete, and In days unmarked Long beyond time Our souls will shine Visions sublime Etched by the love You and I found One for eternity Unbound |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew - Poetically Entertaining Romantically Fulfilling Elegantly Cast Truth ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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M.Marceau New Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 8Current residence The"stute" |
!!!!! Hands clapping |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Why thank you Marge... I like your style too. As for you Mr. M. I must say... and further more... and when you see Dr. Moose tell him.... Thanks and have a great evening. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent form and substance, Andrew. This is good work. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My good friend Sir Balladeer... What has you up so late this evening? What ever the reason you have my most sincere thanks for looking in. Your comments are most valued. I gave this as a present to my wife today... a monthly celebration of our wedding on the 22nd of May. Haven't missed one in 6 1/2 years. You know you've done good when they cry from happiness. Take care my friend and have a safe and happy holiday season. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a beautiful gift! I'd cry from happiness too! Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful gift, beautiful poem Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh so sweet and romantic. Your wife is a lucky lady. Have a happy holiday! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ladies D & Isis... the Moderators seem to be out in force tonight. My thanks too both of you as well. Glad you enjoyed. As for me... My work day has come to a close and I'm going home. Catch you all later. Sleep tight one and all. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sorry Martie, ya snuck in on me. Thanks to you as well. May happy and safe holidays come your way. Peace and good night. [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
It's Christmas Eve and I'm hangin' at work for a couple of hours... radio knows no sleep and I've got to pay my dues just like everyone else around here. Just wanted to send out a big Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you all. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU ... Andrew. May your holiday be the best. My sister and her family live in Redlands/Yucaipa ... lots of love sent your way from all of us. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Coegwyr Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 35 |
A superb poem Andrew but can I give you a word of warning? I once heard tell of a great poet who tore his hair out just READING a fourfold Acrostic, the poor soul that wrote it went quite mad and hasn’t been seen since. I look forward to reading more of your poetry but would hate to see the same fate befall such a masterful poet as yourself. Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Andrew....so very beautiful, both the piece and the gift....!!!! Merry Christmas to you and yours....and a Happy Anniversary although belated Such love brings joy to my heart!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Another fine piece of Work this is, Every thought rings loud and clear. Shinning bright as the sun On a summers day. leaving Me speachless with your words; Eched in my heart, as well as on the paper. Merry Christmas Scott, what a wonderful gift for your wife...and not to worry, I had to work all Christmas Eve too...seems hospitals don't stop for Christmas either [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 12-25-1999).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good poem Really liked it Enjoyable Acrostics can be a pain (I've tried) Terrific Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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