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Local Rebel
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0 posted 1999-12-22 09:30 AM


Imagine in her chair she drapes,
Libation of the desert grapes,
Our lady lives in pleasure's diner,
Voracious for a love that's finer,
Entangled in her lucsious hair,
Inspecting her thong underwear,
Taoist only for today!



 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius

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Iloveit
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1 posted 1999-12-22 09:32 AM


lolol....just have one thing to say about this.....I love it!  
big hugs cutie

Local Rebel
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2 posted 1999-12-22 09:34 AM


Well now the , um, 'cat's' out of the bag.. she wears thongs not pantaloons...ROFL

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius

Iloveit
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3 posted 1999-12-22 09:41 AM


what I would like to know is how the subject of my ummm "pantaloons" came out in Passions....ROFG@cat is out of the bag    
Poet deVine
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4 posted 1999-12-22 09:41 AM


Acrostically speaking, this is great! So did Iloveit get her name from always saying I love it?  

Pepper
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5 posted 1999-12-22 10:14 AM


Too cute  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



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6 posted 1999-12-22 10:23 AM


Not to sound smart. . . but I love it too!!  LOL

And the one question that I think is on all our minds is. . . Rebel, how do you know what Iloveit wears?

Wonderful my friend. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Iloveit
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7 posted 1999-12-22 10:48 AM


well the granny named
Iloveit is ROFG
and not saying a word
and the gentleman named
Rebel has lived up
to his reputation and name
but shows his true colors
by NOT replying
*very stern look*
lolololol

RainbowGirl
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8 posted 1999-12-22 10:52 AM


I love it....*g*

HUSG

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



JTF
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9 posted 1999-12-22 11:05 AM


ROFL ... Very cute LR ...   ... and I see hair being mentioned ...  

Now, can *I* reply ?? [very innocent look, eyelashes fluttering]

RSEvans
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10 posted 1999-12-22 11:11 AM


Should I begin to regret bringing up those pantaloons?  Maybe she just wore them once.


Anyway, good acrostic.  Nice flow.


 Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.

Fairy Colours
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11 posted 1999-12-22 11:15 AM


LOL. I am too through  

 --A Little Fairy--

Beri
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12 posted 1999-12-22 12:22 PM


I must say "I love it" too!  Very cute!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


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13 posted 2004-04-22 03:59 AM


smile
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