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To You Belongs |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
A deep feeling lies within A body that longs for your love A feeling of trust never to be betrayed My heart to you belongs A meaningful thought lies within A brain that longs for your touch A thought of closeness, never apart My mind to you belongs A wonderful excitement lies within A conscience that of you is caring An explosion of a kiss, always to be given My soul to you belongs |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely poem! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you! Let me know if you have any questions!  |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
Wonderful poem, great work. |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
What a beautiful first poem!!! I am at a loss for words --A Little Fairy-- |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah Wilderness!! |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice first poem indeed. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
You've written the best description on the effects of falling in love with someone and maybe they dont feel the same way, WELCOME to passions, my friend! And yes, excellent first post! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I'm going to have to "ditto". (which I dislike doing) This is a wonderful first post! Very heartfelt and warm. Welcome!!  |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome! The commitment of ones heart is so very precious, and your lines say it so well. Thanks. |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
Thank you all for your welcomes and lovely replies. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderful introduction of your work. I hope to see more of you in the future. Kudos |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've portrayed some very intense feelings here, and formatted them quite nicely... I enjoyed this one - looking forward to more ...and welcome aboard....  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem! And welcome! Nice to have you here! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! What a poem to start off with! Well done it is! Hope to see more from ya. Merry Christmas!! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully said |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sad poem, touching ARCTIC WIND |
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