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This Present Golden Dawn
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This Present Golden Dawn |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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Arise, my soul, and hail the dawning day Appreciate this opportunity Bestowed on you to give, to love, to play Cast yesterday far deep beneath the sea. Pressed down be not by sorrows of the past Nor trouble borrow from a future time Be still, my soul, find peace and hold it fast And drift upon calm streams of rest sublime. The future's not yet here, the past is gone 'Tis wasted time to dwell upon such things Enjoy this day, this present golden dawn And skim each cresting wave on soaring wings. The Captain of my ship can never fail O'er troubled waters I can safely sail. Denise |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Carpe Diem D! How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've shed a new light upon an old adage.... and done it well, Denise...  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful words, Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautiful poem Denise. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, This is a keeper, a wonderful poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise this said a mouthful...Enjoy this day, this present golden dawn And skim each cresting wave on soaring wings. What beauty you give us in words! I needed this one dear, thank you! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Wow. Beautiful! samsonheart |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Local Rebal, Nan, Balladeer, Eloise, Seymour, Rebecca and samsonheart for reading and for your kind comments! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sonnet poet - this IS a beautiful one. ~Shaking head~ - Want to teach me? K |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes Denise.....another beautiful sonnet. I love it, I love it, I love it ! : ) |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
This is SUPERB! Rich in lyrical power of the classic style. Doing a print-out right now! Thank you so much for posting this. Rod |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I like your style, Denise. This is exquisite! Only you could have written it! Liz |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Was that a sonnet? If it was then it was a very good one. My hat goes off to you because, a sonnet is not that easy to write. Nathan |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
~Cheers "Encore"~ I like this one alot. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Severn, Munda, Rod, Elizabeth, Nate and Fairy for reading and your kind comments! It is a pleasrure to write for all you wonderful people here at Passions! Again, Severn, much of what I learned I learned from sneaking in on Nan's workshop and from your in depth research that you so kindly did for me! Thanks again, Sweetie! Denise |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful work..I am breathless. Keep up the great work, I love reading it!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Always amazing. Always lovely. Always you present your best. Always I enjoy. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Krista and Marge for your always wonderful comments! You all are such a pleasure to me! Denise |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Denise, your work is an Inspiration!!! mcestrada |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you so much, mc, for reading and your kind comment! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Denise |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks so much, Ruth! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful piece Denise..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Denise~ Beautiful work, as always. Merry Christmas my friend-thank you for sharing with us the gift of your poetry. Love ya. Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I just have to bring this one back to the top! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Pepper, Elizabeth and Master for reading and for your kind comments! Denise |
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