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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
Love Changes Shall I name the cause of my discontent As though another lover¹s lament No, it has more depth than that And was not my intent, in fact You must realize love is a changing thing From its great depth, can surface and take wing Die like unfanned coals Become wreckage on the sholes As my love grew, her¹s died Flowed away, me the sand her the tide The despair I felt was in the knowing That twas I failed the coals glowing No, my intent here is to warn You must look now, don¹t wait the morn Search deep and know your heart For if you scorn, love will depart |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is some good advice, Tom... |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I like that analagy..."me the sand, her the tide", it really paints an image. Enjoyed the writing and warning. Thanks. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem...wise words! (ask my ex...hehehehe) Welcome to Passions, Tom. This is the first of yours I have read! I'll be looking for more! Denise |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I wish i would have read this "warning" befor falling in love...for this is the most accurate description of what love can and will do...great poem and well expressed!  Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very, very nice.  |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
I really liked your poem. Its all so true love is so unfair sometimes but then it can be so wonderful |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, I agree with the sentiment Liz |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Such beautiful, descriptive words. God I wish I could have read this before I fell in love!!! It would have made me think a little bit. --A Little Fairy-- |
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
This was not meant as prelove training advice. This was about my ex wife of 20 years. And it was about how I failed. Thanks. Tom |
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