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The Shadow Of Myself
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The Shadow Of Myself |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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, Shadow Of Myself ~ I am the shadow of myself cloaked in dark mystery visionless eyes that do not see the light hooded hoardes of thoughts confront me in the night seeking to find where I can hide from things that hide in me ~ ~ ~ the shadow of myself casting yet another shadow of me < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) this is dynamic! I love the format, and echo myself so much...that penchant I think we all have for hiding. Well done, my friend! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Is there no end to your talents? This is great, Marge! Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - Thank you for finding a little of yourself in this. ~*Marge*~ Elizabeth, my friend - So glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the great big compliment. Love to you. And the answer is ... I hope not ! ~*Marge*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I have a little shadow who didn't mind helping me. She's a moderator just as she should be. Couldn't get it centered, but she put it on the line. Up in time ... thanks PoetDeVine.  Many thanks ... ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I get that "how many times your can see a mirror in a mirror" effect with this poem. Intriguing work, to say the least. Good poem. Michael |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Awesome poem. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael - Thanks so much. That is a good interpretation for the effect of this poem. I am more than pleased that you found it to be intriguing. ~*Marge*~ Fairy Colours - You are becoming quite the friend here, both as a reader and a good writer. Hope you continue to enjoy as we enjoy you. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Truly creative -- a shadow of a shadow...  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is sooo creative, Marge! I love it No end to your talents, is there? Great poem, and artful formatting! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Local Rebel - Thank you. Now you've inspired me to stretch my shadow ! A shadow of a shadow r e a c h i n g out to me Trying to capture the elusive set free me changing rearranging s t r e t c h i n g to find where I begin and my shadow leaves off to become the other me s t r e t c h i n g we are one in me ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Stretching is good... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Caroline - Thank you so much. I enjoy penning all of my poetry, but I really, really enjoyed this. You are so kind, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This format is very interesting |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - Tank you, mah deah ... I vas on a  for somethink different !~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are amazing, Marge! And you have proven it yet again! This is wonderful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Thank you ... The SHADOW Knows (Denise .. I'm being held captive by the muses .... HELP !)< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this one Marge! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Your such a lovely writter marge ARCTIC WIND |
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