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Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-12-20 11:28 PM



Familiar Road

You’ve been hurt
And feel betrayed.
You’re walking the road
That I have paved.

I’ve been there before,
It leads nowhere.
And you’ll wander
About in despair.

Forgiving others
Is the key
Take my hand,
Place trust in me.

We’ll do this together,
Side by side.
Throughout this journey,
I’ll be your guide.

I’ll light the path
That looms ahead
I promise
You won’t be misled.

Finding salvation
Is the key,
The only way to set
You free.

Then your suffering
Will find release.
May your heart
Be at peace.




 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
myslinky
Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 27

1 posted 1999-12-20 11:36 PM


Doesn´t it suck that we all have to go down that road sooner or later!

THis a very good poem.

 Words like violence
Break the silence
M.L. Gore

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-21 12:12 PM


This is lovely, Tara! I enjoyed this much!  

 Denise



Julie Jordan Scott
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146
Bakersfield, CA USA
3 posted 1999-12-21 01:18 AM


Dear Tara,

Familiar roads, familiar heartache, familiar pains are all eased by the companionship of a caring heart.  You show time and again through both your actions and your heartfelt friendship that you will always light the path for those who you come alongside.


 I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting
men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn
live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the
Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the
bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment
to pursue my own purpose and passion.


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-12-21 04:03 AM


Tara - this is exquisite in its form and intensely moving. Thankyou for this.
Rod
Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149
Auckland New Zealand
5 posted 1999-12-21 04:54 AM


You are so right - and you are not alone!
A beautiful poem Tara - well done.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-12-21 11:57 AM


Well done my friend  
Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
7 posted 1999-12-21 08:15 PM


Ruth, Rod, MySlinky, Denise:  Thank you all.

Julie, how true.  Having a friend does make the journey so much easier to bear.

Severn:   You can use the word exquisite to describe my work anytime you like!


 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2005-04-15 05:35 AM


oh...precious this is!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-11-12 04:24 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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