Open Poetry #4 |
Tides |
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Tides Life in the pools left from waters receding hopes not in present confines with limitations bordered in sand… nor believes on rumors told from ignorance learned… but trusts only on promises of tides returning. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, there's no going back, Robert, except for those of us that turn into scum |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
} Balladeer not sure I follow you...or sure you follow me!!! lol Robert |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
and they do always return.... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. The world is filled with things over my head. I guess your poem just got added to the list. Anyway, I will think it means what I think it means and consider it a great work. It's probably a great work meaning what you created it to mean but, since I'm not sure what that means, I will fill it with meaning meant for my mean brain of no little means. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, yes! I like this very much! And like Balladeer, I know what it means to me, but I think I know what you meant, but I'm not telling you, 'cause whenever I do that I'm wrong! hehehehehe Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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