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Can You Mend This Broken Heart ?
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Can You Mend This Broken Heart ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Can You Mend This Broken Heart ? ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 You've tried to enter a broken heart. It's broken beyond repair. It isn't open for business. If it's closed I just don't care. You say that you're the repairman, who can get the job done tonight. Well, show me an estimate. Let's see if you've figured it right. __________________________________________ ESTIMATE FOR REPAIRS ------------------------------------------ Tender Loving Care - No Charge Gentle Words To Wear - No Charge Strong Arms To Bear - No Charge A Little Time To Be Free - No Charge Whispers Of Love - No Charge Faithful Heart - No Charge Love In Return - Only Charge __________________________________________ You've shown me an estimate, when can you start? I want you to live in this remodeled heart. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Quest New Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 9 |
A sigh and a kiss brought to mind someone I said goodbye to this afternoon. Love in return was my only charge, a price she could not pay. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Unique...tender...marvellous!  K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Her imagination has no end And neither does her heart If I were the repairman I'd never want to part Very, very sweet Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I echo Severn.....loved this read!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quest - Then she wasn't the right repairman, love. Take your time .. but get another estimate. Love comes right in and settles down when it's the right love. Merry Christmas to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - Thank you, girlfriend. Elizabeth, my friend - Smiles to you and then some.   Pepper - Thank you ... I'm soooo glad. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Why does it seem that the things given for free in life are the ones that people have the hardest time of accepting. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Marge and great question, Ruth. I for one don't know the answer. Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Loved this poem.....Makes one think...and more so it has brought trust to my mind. I mean to allow a repair at no cost to you is great trust that it will be done right. TO answer Hoot>....So often when someone gives something for free....We often think they have something to gain. Lack of trust is the reason. Who would give for free what others would charge for? Only those that love you would God BlessShare what you are for you are what you share |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Very creative and beautiful samsonheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - The answer eludes some ... but thank goodness that most of do know the answers. Thanks, hon. Denise - Thank you my friend. Sometimes it's difficult for hearts to accept that love can be so easy. First_Knight - Thank you. Love is all about trusting and taking a chance that you just might be right. SamsonHeart - I'm just so glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very creative, love it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
OH marge, i cant believe how much i love your poems, they are sweet and beautiful poems, i love your new ones too ARCTIC WIND |
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