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paperguardian
Junior Member

since 1999-12-07

Posts 25

0 posted 1999-12-08 10:38 PM

Here's to the dream,
and here's to the chance,
of living noble love,
of making this our dance.

Across the boundaries,
marked highways and hills,
that blesses with promise,
then breathlessly stills:

This heavenly plan,
that is envied by time,
of more number than the sand
one word more than rhyme.

Without hand upon hand,
that the distances part,
I will love you my best,
by heart bound to heart.

Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

1 posted 1999-12-08 11:04 PM

Beautiful, paper. I just hope the dream makes it! Good luck!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-12-08 11:27 PM

WELCOME I just love that second stanza. And a big good luck from me too!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 1999-12-08 11:32 PM

PaperGuardian -
'heart bound to heart'
Breathless!

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-08 11:57 PM

So lovely, paperguardian. Beautifully done! Welcome to Passions! You're gonna love it here!

Denise

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-12-09 12:06 PM

Gee, this is the second poem of yours I've read..and you know what! This one's as good as the first! I like it! Make yourself at home, hope you plan to stay awhile!

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

6 posted 1999-12-09 12:14 PM

Lines seven and eight were my favorites, but the whole thing was well done. Here's to the dream, indeed.

--Kess

You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-12-09 12:25 PM

Beautiful

paperguardian
Junior Member

since 1999-12-07

Posts 25

8 posted 1999-12-09 07:17 AM

Thanks to everyone!

Seaangel- the luck is well received, I need it for this dream!
WhtDove- Thanks for the welcome and the luck!
Marge and dsnyder- glad you liked it and thanks for such a warm welcome!
Poet deVine- I think I'll settle in- I really love it here!

Skyfyre- I liked those two lines the best too!

hoot_owl_rn-thanks for the praise!

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

9 posted 1999-12-09 08:10 AM

This piece is simply Wonderful Paperguardian....
Welcome to Passions!!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

10 posted 1999-12-20 03:22 PM

Here's to the dream,
and here's to the chance

I'm a dreamer and a risk taker. With lines like this you will always be able to reel me in for a read.

Nicely done PG. Liked... Alot...

There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix

samsonheart
Member

since 1999-12-20

Posts 72
Missouri rez.

11 posted 1999-12-20 06:15 PM

What a wonderful talent you have, I hope to read much more from you, I really enjoyed this one.

samsonheart

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 1999-12-20 06:22 PM

Paperguardian,
Excellent last stanza and poem.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

13 posted 1999-12-20 06:29 PM

Yes, I agree with Sy, The last verse is beautiful!
Great poem!
Liz

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 1999-12-21 10:52 AM

This is a beautiful poem--very well written from beginning to end.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

15 posted 1999-12-21 11:48 AM

I have to agree with everyone...great poem even if it is your secound...i'm willing to read more, so please dont stop posting...

Starboards

"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2005-04-15 05:43 AM

great write!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

17 posted 2007-11-12 06:49 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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