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Felt So Alive
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Felt So Alive |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
I felt so alive that day I can’t hide the fact that I’ve fallen for you For very much longer anyway You see my heart is very tender It was actually ripped to pieces once, I just stood there, looking down at the tattered remains wondering if I’d ever be the same, and now I know. Of course I know....because of you.... I felt so alive that day My heart had found a way to heal itself You didn’t know it at the time At the time you were so unaware that you were the reason I felt so alive You just smiled, And I smiled inside. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WELCOME!!!  And a very tender piece indeed. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Heartfelt work here. I understand what you meant in every word  Thank you for sharing and welcomeShare what you are for you are what you share |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very pretty work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed! Welcome to Passions! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written...welcome to passions |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Samson Welcome to passions. I loved your first post. |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Beautiful !! mcestrada |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samsonheart, Enjoyed and welcome. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It seems you have taken this right out of my heart. Great work! Look forward to seeing more from you Thank you |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This poem is sad but yet beautiful, for hope is still there and love can be born again. I understand your heart being cut to pieces...I have been there and done that! Welcome to passions! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
while reading this i pictured you looking down at your torn heart, great expressions! Starboards |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Thank you very much everyone! Your comments build my confidence and just made my day! -Samsonheart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions, and with a heart in love, we should be getting more little gems like this from you, Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful words my friend. . . I too have been in love, so your words speak to me. . . Your name is quite interesting. . . the heart of samson. . . I like it. . . Welcome to Passions. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Thank you Elizabeth and Sven, your compliments are taken to heart. -samsonheart |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Nice entrance you make! This is lovely, very heartfelt. Welcome...I'll be looking forward to more of your poetry It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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