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Pretty pain... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
pretty boys do talk of pain lonely nights and sleeping in the rain like they know.. pretty girls do speak of rage losing love feeling distant..squirming in the mud liars and whiners never knowing of what they speak if i outlined it for you it may take weeks and it would ruin your pretty little lives give you a perspective you would not like show you pretty hate pretty pain what true rain feels like and what rage really is all about.. could you handle that pretty boy? pretty girl.. pretty world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
No, I'll take a pass on any more pain, thank you...hehehe...great poem, Jackal! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gee, sounds upsetting. What a way to get the point across. Good one. <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
haven't seen you post in a while, but you haven't lost your touch. this is a great poem. i hope to read some more of your poetry soon |
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