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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-19 07:29 PM


pretty boys do talk of pain
lonely nights and sleeping in the rain
like they know..
pretty girls do speak of rage
losing love
feeling distant..squirming in the mud
liars and whiners
never knowing of what they speak
if i outlined it for you
it may take weeks
and it would ruin your pretty little lives
give you a perspective you would not like
show you pretty hate
pretty pain
what true rain feels like
and what rage really is all about..
could you handle that pretty boy?
pretty girl..
pretty world...



 

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-19 07:42 PM


No, I'll take a pass on any more pain, thank you...hehehe...great poem, Jackal!

 Denise



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-12-19 08:23 PM


Gee, sounds upsetting. What a way to get the point across. Good one.

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Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas


roxane
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
3 posted 1999-12-20 12:29 PM


haven't seen you post in a while, but you haven't lost your touch.  this is a great poem.  i hope to read some more of your poetry soon

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