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Love at First Sight |
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
I remember that evening months ago like a seed falling on warm ground Feeling a pull, a need so basic once together it was so natural I remember your beauty, your eyes and something else deep in you Like sadness covered with courage yet there was such calm and sweetness The seed started to sprout as we teased The long glances were like water Your smile, your face, your eyes Those lovely pools that I fell into When we danced and touched your arms were like roots spreading within me Your kiss was warm air and sunlight making a complete and living thing Now it is dried between the pages of a book A book that is opened every time I hear from you I never fail to look at it and remember that evening months ago It is done growing now but oh what a wondrous thing it is For it produced a seed that may one day grow again |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TomS - Welcome to Passions. Your thoughts are just lovely. I hope the seed blossoms. Quite a 'gardener' you are, tending these words so expertly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Very nicely done! I like this a lot...look forward to reading more from you! Let me know if you ever have any questions about our home!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! What a memory to have and hold. This was great! I hope that seed will one day again bloom. Hope to see more from you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Tom! Very beautiful poem! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tom, Enjoyed the read. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes..... another hopeless romantic... Welcome aboard, Tom.....  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Spring comes again... and the seeds respond to the warmth. *S* Welcome! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh how beautiful....welcome to passions |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Tom Welcome Great poem. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely piece!...Welcome to Passions Tom A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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