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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-19 01:23 AM

My soul has long seeked
The glitter of my dreams
Reaching outward
Towards the silver skies
Wanting only
Acceptance.

My heart once yearned
To be understood
A tender hand to hold
A soft embrace
Wishing only for
A friend.

I once felt abandoned
Within this world
Iced over
Closed from life
Needing only
To be lifted up.

In the light of your eyes
My body emmersed
I am now whole
So safe here
Wrapped within the cloak
Of you.

Upon warming wings
I fly
As you carress my face
And whisper tenderly
I know now
You are where I belong.

~Jeff, you are my world, and I love you more than anything~

*Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

Dusk Treader

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1 posted 1999-12-19 01:31 AM

Isn't that sweet!?

Great poem, Krista, I'm happy for you two, hehe..

In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn.

poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 1999-12-19 02:15 AM

Ah....you're so sappy when you're in love! hehe Join the sappy club! I'm the treasurer! LOL Great poem, really! So glad to see more of your stuff!

- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Seaangel
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3 posted 1999-12-19 02:55 AM

Lovely poem, Alwye, especially liked the first part..."the glitter of dreams"... and "warming wings"..beautiful.

DreamEvil
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4 posted 1999-12-19 04:23 AM

'Tis very well done my friend.

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-12-19 08:17 AM

Veyr nicely written Alwye and I like the form you used here...just a discussion I had with another poet about free verse the other day...who says free verse can't be formed? The format work well with this. Nicely done

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-12-19 08:19 AM

Beaytifully written from a heart in love
Liz

WhtDove
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7 posted 1999-12-19 10:42 AM

Alwye this was beautiful! Ain't love grand? hehe, glad to see you happy!

caroline
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8 posted 1999-12-19 11:26 AM

So lovely, this is, Alwye...I always love your poetry. Nice to see your heart is happy, friend

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Pepper
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9 posted 1999-12-19 11:33 AM

So sweet..left my heart smiling Alwye

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon

Denise

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10 posted 1999-12-19 06:21 PM

Yes, me too! This brought a smile to my heart!

Denise

Alwye

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In the space between moments

11 posted 1999-12-19 09:11 PM

Yes, my heart is indeed happy.

Thank you all so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me.

*Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

Balladeer

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12 posted 1999-12-19 09:21 PM

Delightful, Krista, and congratulations.

Marge Tindal

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13 posted 1999-12-19 09:30 PM

Alwye -
Ah ... love that makes the heart sing,
what a wonderful feeling you've portrayed.
Best of everything to you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Munda
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14 posted 1999-12-19 09:41 PM

I'm so happy for you Alwye ! : ) A lovely poem you wrote. I loved it.
Merry Christmas to both of you. : )
Hugs.

Munda

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