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An old poem of mine
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An old poem of mine |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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I spoke to her while she was listening “True love is missing what you have” First, she responded with a laugh Then said to me, “true love is missing” “True love is present when I kiss you,” I said to her, “Just try to see” She closed her eyes, then spoke to me “I hope you know, I truly miss you” I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like true love to me! This is sweet, Master!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Master, Interesting, enjoyed. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you both, I wish it was true love! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
An old poem, new to me I like it! Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
New to me too! Let's hope it grows! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I wrote this about a year ago, but I only posted it once before. Glad you liked it! |
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