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Goodbye ( to Sonya)
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Goodbye ( to Sonya) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This poem is basically true. I just added some lines to give it some pep. The time that feared most has come. We used to be together as one. But today, we will go our seperate ways. Baby, please don't cry because, it was meant for you and I Even though I have to say gooodbye, our love for one another will never die. While you'll be headed to Georgia, I'll be headed for Florida. I will miss you very much because, only you got that midas touch. I love you like no other because, you are my lover. I wish you the best of luck in the future because, you turned me into a winner when I was a loser. Thank God for you because, you've made my dreams come true. Now wipe your weepy eyes and give me a long and passionate kiss of goodbye. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sad, Nate. I'm sorry that it's true. Denise |
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sraet Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 31 |
wow, this is heart wrenching... especially the last line, reminds me of something (or someone). I hate sad endings!  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you for the comments! I'm glad y'll liked it. Nathan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad stuff |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed and very sad! ARCTIC WIND |
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