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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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NightFall While the crickets sing and the saccade's cry I sit here and wonder at the beauty of the sky The pastel colours created by the setting sun There's no wonder Nature shares its passion When the pastel colours slowly turn to slate Patiently the dark velvet night I do await The shimmering stars will come out to play And the golden moon will light the way For all of the creatures great and small To find their way, during nightfall The saccade's lay themselves to rest For their passions have been expressed Lovers dance under the Mystic moon While with their emotions it does attune I sit here and wonder at the beauty of the sky Wanting to sing and wanting to cry. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Hon, this is so beautiful! I know just the feeling you have here...you've expressed it with passion...you must be writing with those angel wings of yours!  Lovely!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, thanks sweet one, you make me smile What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful, Dark Angel! I love it! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DA, You did a good job on this one I really enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise and Seymour, thanks so much for your lovely comments,I'm glad you enjoyed it. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very well done soul-sib. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
DA - beautiful! I have felt just that myself. K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this was excellent! But why you wanna cry girl? Leave me a message or email k? ~hugs~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dark Angel...this is beautiful |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-brother, thanks so much --------------- Severn, Thank you --------------- Thank you WhtDove, cry? because it's beautiful --------------- Ruth, thank you so much Hon What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dark Angel I love what you write I love your "velvet night" Don't cry, for you shall have Your "velvet knight" Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful imagery.....gorgeous piece DA....This is certainly a keeper... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow DA - I love this! I often look up at the sky and am just totally blown away by the beauty of it - sometimes I think people take the beauty around them for granted. You expressed this beautifully, I can actually see it. Well done. Huggs....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, Thanks so much hon -------------- Pepper, Thank you I appreciate it. -------------- Moonshine Thank you, yes sometimes we do take it for granted don't we. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sing - and rejoice - for with each sunset, there is an equally resplendent sunrise..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Miss Maree, you should repost this one for everyone to see in the current forum I love this! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I really enjoyed this ARCTIC WIND |
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