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I Hope My Love Does Show
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I Hope My Love Does Show |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
The constant thoughts that fill my mind Are of you, my only love. You're the shoulder when I'm crying and The one I'm dreaming of. You're my first thought in the morning And last one late at night. You changed so much by loving me; For once my life is right. Nothing seems to matter now, Except for what we share... You're the first to take away my scars; The first who's always there. You're everything I could wish for; Fulfilling all my dreams. Now those joyous tears of happiness are Tumbling down in streams. I'd never be able to describe With all words man does know, Yet through this and all my actions I hope my love does show. **I love you Justin with all my heart and soul** ~Jess~ |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
y Your love shows to me more than u think Jessica |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Blue Eyed Wanderer, I enjoyed the read. You have a talent! Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is sweet and I like his reply  |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Elizabeth and Hoot--Thank you both very much! Justin-- |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, your love shows and so does his. How wonderful. Loved the poem Liz |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I just want to thank everyone for the nice comments about me and my girlfriend Jessica and her poem. I figered this poem desved another reply Jessica so I figer I tell u this I  U Jessica Will u marry me?
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh Wow.....a proposal...soooo romantic......I'm dying to hear your answer BEW......  Lovely poem btw... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Justin--Whoa! That caught me a teensy bit off guard! Course I will baby! We just have to wait a couple of years because its kinda just a little bit against the law right now. I love you...Elizabeth Santos and Pepper--thank you both so much for the comments...they mean a lot! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely! So very nice! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful! *Krista Knutson* ~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is marvelous It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Beautiful poem! It shows it really does! And now a marriage proposal on top of it? Oh my! Woohoo!! Best of luck you two! |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Great poem! Congratulations to you both. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*****Hands out the bags of rice ***** Wow a marriage proposal right her on passions. WOW!! What a great way to propose. Congrats you two |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
dsnyder, alwye, caroline, whtdove, kelly, and hoot~~Thanks everyone! The big day probably won't be for at least another 5 years or so, cause I want to finish high school and college first, but you'll all be the first to know when exactly it'll be, and of course you'll all be invited! ~Jess~ |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
2006 Valentin's Day Hows that sound Jessica and everyone else. I YOU JESSICA
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
You should know that any date is fine with me baby I love you...can't wait to talk to you tonight...Thanks again to everyone here! ~Jess~ |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Jess, I'm a new member, this is my first reply, and your poem caught my eye so I thought I'd say how much I liked it. Very good job. -samsonheart |
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