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First Try at Acrostics
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First Try at Acrostics |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Was trying to make every other line rhyme also, which I don't usually do. I admire those who do this with such ease. First Try at Acrostics First try is always the most difficult In any new and serious endeavor Regardless the end that you exult Sometimes it's a little hard to weather Those who tell you to just dive in Are those who never tried themselves That longing which you have within This is the force that makes you delve Even God took time to think Making man was complicated Putting woman next to him This has been quite under-rated Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-19-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love that ending my friend!!! hehe. Well done! From someone who has only done two (and you saw one) I applaud you!  K |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauds!!! Must be nice to master something in your first attempt  You did well Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, girls I take a bow One more lesson learned in the Passions school of poetry. I'll try to make it better next time Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
First attempt huh, I never would have guessed that!....I, like Severn loved the ending... Well done!!A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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M.Marceau New Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 8Current residence The"stute" |
!!! Doc here, Allow me to translate, I believe what my friend is trying to say is... Never would have thought It to be your first Congratulations E. Santos Eloquent your verse Once you've tried this form Nothing's in your way Each will be as good I'm sure (you'd not have it another way) Hands clapping |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Pepper, Thanks, sweetie Doc Thank you, my acrostics friend How wonderfully you do wend Acostics verse with utter grace No one would attempt outpace Kind of makes me emulate So sharp a poet to imitate Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-19-1999).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend - Very nicely done. By golly, I think you've got it ! Said with grace. Done with ease. An acrostic from you, does surely please. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well a job well done it is! Very good! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Marge and WhtDove, I'm learning! Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A very good first attempt, Elizabeth. I hope you will endeavor further into this realm. Michael |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good work, Elizabeth. You only faltered on the rhyme once and the acrostic was excellent. Let's see some more! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You did it swell, But then you do everything well. You filled the order the first time out Not only well, but with lots of clout. Love ya, Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Michael and Balladeer, Compliments from the Experts, humbly received Thank you Sy, Thank you for describing my gnomes Helpers that I call my own And ones I cannot live without Not to mention, they've got the clout Kind of hope you'll notice, too Some acrostic thanks to you You really make me smile Liz |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Elizabeth: Well done.. and love the last line..*g*HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Elizabeth! Is there no end to your talent? I must say this is superb!  Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow and Denise Thank you both, glad you liked it Liz |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
And a very good attempt it was, my friend! Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
....ya know - I really enjoy reading these - as I have yours.... writing them is a whole 'nother story... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
A big "Bravissimo" from me here! I LOVE acrostics, and you've nalied this one beautifully! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, this is terrific!!! I love this, And I love acrostics. Well Done!! I'll be looking out for more.What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Nan, Christopher and DarkAngel for your comments Liz |
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