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drift from the scene
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drift from the scene |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Lost in the moment you drift from the scene eyes on each other brief seconds serene. Together we fade from anything real alone with each other and all that we feel. Your eyes all I need to love you tonight can’t give you a reason, just know that it’s right. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Wow kevin, I like this one! A real romeo you are! keep it up! Starboards ************************* "You will see a lot of things, But they will mean nothing to you If you lose sight of the thing you love." -from the movie "At First Site" ************************* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice work, Kevin!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very lovely little poem! Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin, the rhyme and rhythm are great in this one...oh, and I'm kind of fond of the subject matter too...romance is wonderful Well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin - With such beautiful words ... you don't need any other reason. BEAUTIFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
sweeet |
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