Open Poetry #4 |
Memories |
Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Memories Six months ago today Was the day in which you passed. Half a year ago you took The breath that was your last. Of course you've been remembered; We never could forget. You're still thought of by others who You haven't even met. You were such an example; So courageous and so brave. The legacies you left behind Have not gone into the grave. Each day when you were living You awoke with a great smile. Though crippled and in pain You made your life worthwhile. Your wheelchair and your problems Mattered not at all. Physically you couldn't stand, But the real you stood up tall. Although things are much better, They'll never be the same. You'll never be forgotten; Your memories will remain. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
What a beautiful tribute. This took me back to when my Grandfather passed. Sounds as if it could have been him. Thank you....you made me smile with a tear. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very touching piece. May the memories never fade. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful tribute to a loved one. Very very nice! Denise |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Irie~~Your welcome...and thank you! Sometimes its good to travel back and remember with a smile and some of those "happy tears" *sigh* Michael~~I sure hope they never fade. Thank you. Dsnyder~~Thank you very very much! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So very touching...very |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I love this poem Jessica its really sweet I love u JD Every thing Dies |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Thank you so much Hoot Justin--thanks hun! I love you too. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I, too, see this as an excellent tribute and a good poem, to boot. |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Balladeer--Thank you! It's kind of an honor to have you like one of my poems in some strange way You're one of the best poets here, and it means a lot. Thanks again ~Jess~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed this poem alot ARCTIC WIND |
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