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andy
Junior Member

since 1999-12-16

Posts 17

0 posted 1999-12-16 07:14 PM

The blanket of night will arrive with thunder,
and descend on NZ and try to plunder,
the last wisps of light that came down from the heavens,
and because of that crime we can't find our bearings.

The eve of the weekend is now upon us,
the light of the moon has indeed shown us,
the way home, safe to our beds,
so I can nod off, Goodnight sleepyhead.

By andy

[This message has been edited by andy (edited 12-16-1999).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 1999-12-16 07:20 PM

Andy -
Another charmer is what
you have written.
Enjoyed it much.
Sleep well.
Love ~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

2 posted 1999-12-16 11:04 PM

Goodnight, andy!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-16 11:14 PM

Charming, indeed! Goodnight, Andy!

Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-12-17 06:01 AM

Well, since you are already asleep I will say good morning!

You're a great poet for an 11 year old you know (even if you do steal green milk...
just joking

)

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

5 posted 1999-12-19 12:13 PM

Hold it - hold it! Did someone say you're 11 years old? Gees, you certainly are a splendid poet for such a young age! I can't wait to see what you write like in another 10 years! LOL You have a fabulous way with rhyming indeed! Splendid vocab too! Keep on writing, definately! BRAVO

- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 1999-12-19 12:35 PM

Andy--I do like the way you write!

andy
Junior Member

since 1999-12-16

Posts 17

7 posted 1999-12-20 11:59 PM

Thanks people

!
I've had "heaps" of replies.

The poems I have seen are wonderful

I hope to see some others

samsonheart
Member

since 1999-12-20

Posts 72
Missouri rez.

8 posted 1999-12-21 12:30 PM

great poem andy, the kind I could read to my nephews when I tuck them in.

samsonheart

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