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amandafoose
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since 1999-12-20
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0 posted 1999-12-20 08:27 PM



Til the night comes
Til the windows open
Til the day breaks
Til the birds have spoken
Til the rain falls
Til the water dries out
Til you love me
Til you know what I'm about
Til then and still now
I want you to know
That whatever fate brings you
And wherever you go
I will wait for you and for forever

© Copyright 1999 amandafoose - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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since 1999-11-02
Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa
1 posted 1999-12-20 08:33 PM


Welcome to passions!!!! this is so good im gonna go find your firstpost!
excellent

OH yah! CLOSE YOUR EYES LOVE, i already read it, that was equally as wonderful...

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-20-1999).]

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-21 12:38 PM


Beautiful!

 Denise



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