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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
and if I want you more than you want me, then what my sweet? shall my wanting be enough to see us through or will you eventually wander to where your wanting is more where it is enough to match your need? and if your loving me frightens me to flight will you spread your wings and fly with me, just so I will never be alone? or shall you wait patiently for my wings to tire and for me to return to your arms? and if we found in each other only what we looked to find, only what we longed for, and didn't heed what was really there and the roaring fire, to not more than an ember dies, shall you remain my friend and still find comfort in my hugs smile with me when I smile and offer me your shoulder when I cry? shall there still be a place of solace for you in me? remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tears here sweetheart... HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Sometimes we find in someone everything we're looking for, but forget to look at what else is there. Excellent expression. Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
lloveit, You did good, made me think. Enjoyed the ead. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I know rainbow, I know, me too.....those "and if" days are never without tears....hugs RS, yep I know, I find an honesty in myself and my emotions when I write....glad you enjoyed seymour as long as what's in your heart engages what's in your head...you will be ok....thanks  and jtf lol I know this is cheating, but I noticed I spelled seymour's name wrong and wanted to correct it and so am including your thanks here above....lol....so I am a cheater...I am a grateful one lol....thanks...lots [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Lovey, I pray that yes is the answer to your last 2 questions ... your love deserves it ... HUSG |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I Love It!!! This is well written and I think we all have asked very similar questions at one point or another in our lives |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I really liked this a lot. I wish you the best of luck. If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must echo the sentiments of my other friends here. . . but you know, why ask? Sometimes, you just have to take the risk. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A lovely, lovely poem And thoughtful questions Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Eloquently put, lovey. A man would have to be crazy to say no. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hoot thanks...just when I am thinking I don't have a single poem to write...I start thinking "and if..." sigh Lynn thanks, and yep, wish me good luck, I have had plenty of the bad kind already lol sven I know, my day in the sun will come thanksElizabeth glad you enjoyed, am in a thoughtful mood today... Balladeer lol and it would be just my luck out of all the men out there to pick the crazy one *tilts her head and softly smiles*....thanks for the compliments my friend |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks denise, glad you liked..... night all.....sighs and hugs remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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