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Fermented juices and toxic wine
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Fermented juices and toxic wine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Fermented juices and toxic wine Kindled questions scourge my night, Lighting areas I would not light. Fermenting juices of my brain. With toxic wines of potent strain. And in the glasses medleys warm, Lit with silver of ghostly form. Erotica in as bold a toast, As any I could boast or host. I know not why these demons lie. It's not my wakeful nature, not I. But desires seem to crash in waves And make my mind go into raves. What curse is this that steals my peace? What answer there, could give release? I'd gladly lay my amour down, Even if I would a clown. So in dilemma, here I lie And wrestle with my devils Why? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Your verse is beautiful as usual Exquisite words and lyric fine I have but one request to make Can I have a little of that wine? Sounds great! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, For pity sake, for pity sake, Take all that you can take. Loved your response, Love you. Sy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sy....(sigh).....  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done... enjoyed. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another great poem from Seymour! It's like routine for you. You never ceases to amaze me. I hope I don't offend anybody but you are the best poet on this board. Your imagery and the way you use and compose your words is unlike any other I've seen on this board. In fact your syle kind of reminds me of Robert Frost. Once again, great poem and I hope you keep it up! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'll second that! Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy, another beauty - slightly confounding on first read, but I suspect you wouldn't have it any other way - so I'm off to read it again! K |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem as usual Sy. What kind of wine did you say that was? The nightly devil's brew, made just for you. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent poem, Seymour Frost.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Sigh right back, Thank you. *L* Mike, Big thanks. Nate, You haven't read Balladeer,Nan,Michael or poetdeVine. The only thing Of Frost about me is my nose. But a big thanks to you. Severn, What ever is between the lines I know you will find. *L* Matrie, It's private stock. *L* Balladeer, You are a master of quips and the only thing of Frost about me, as I said bebore is my nose, sometimes. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
So open up and find release! The drink you choose won't bring you peace. Suspecting with your armor down, Not one would find you act a clown.  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Seymour, I agree...Mr. Frost has nothing over you! Excellent, as usual! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quite a poem, Seymour ... What a fine kettle of fish that would be ... Seymour snockered on a little Chablis` Seymour the ~Frosty~ poet had a very shiny nose. And if you ever saw it you would even say it glows! After a bottle of good Red Wine ... dancing on the rooftop would be fine. Seymour the ~Frosty~ poet, Passion's friends all agree. He's just the sort to 'pop a cork' ... and with friends of his to consort ! The questions of the devils sot ... is not why ... but WHY NOT ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, Loved your little poem and your right. *L* Denise, Thank you Denice you are the sweetest of sweet. *L* Marge, Your poem sais much And I would enclose, A shot of schnapps, Is good for the nose. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Given the choice 'Tween words or wine I'll chose your words They are so fine And drunken on Your poetry Stronger than wine I'd rather be The bite is milder And in the 'morn I won't be wishing I was never born Seymore, I can get drunk on your words and not have to nurse a hangover in the morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Your poen is so sweet in spin, I think I need some insulin. *L* Sy |
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