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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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The years pass by us so quickly < !signature-->Like a coursing river swiftly From the day we are born until we die We're here then gone in the blink of an eye. But this moment is ours to hold To possess even should we grow old This moment that we can make last This treasure that shall be our past. And as the years go rushing by Like the hurried flocks in the autumn sky We'll hold that memory always dear That 'moment in time' forever near. And if my days on earth be done Don't grieve too long, my darling one Just reach inside your heart to find That cherished memory, fair and kind. Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
As usual... wonderful. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Very pretty .. as is your picture. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you, Denise - and of course, it's a great poem.....  |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Very Sweet! *S* |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise, this is a lovely poem and you are a lovely lady. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you so much, Mike, Marge, Nan, Master and Martie! So glad you liked it! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, I love this poem! Yes, A moment can stand still in your memory, and you've captured it beautifully. I love your work. Liz |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very pretty D yuh work is inspirational |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Never been disappointed D...another beautiful memory. Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Now this one I can identify with. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely poem Denise. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done lady...(yanno?...you don't write like a blond?) |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Lovely, Denise!! And it's nice to see you finally!  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
will ditto any of the above lol, great poem, great pic..... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth - Thanks so much! wayoutwalt - Thanks and so nice to have you back! RS-Wow, thank you! I've never been disappointed in any of yours either! DreamEvil- Thanks! I'm glad you can relate! Dark Angel- Thanks so much! Toe- Glad you liked it! Thanks! Sally-Thanks so much and it was great to see you too! Denise |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well thank you lloveit! You beat me to the post! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Reminding me that I need to savour every moment...thank you for that. "Stop this day and night with me and you shall possess the origin of all poems, You shall possess the good of the earth and sun (there are millions of suns left,) You shall no longer take things at second or third hand, nor look through the eyes of the dead, nor feed on the spectres in books, You shall not look through my eyes either, nor take things from me, You shall listen to all sides and filter them from your self." >Walt Whitman, Song of Myself. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Pure poetry, Denise, as beautiful as always. To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Seaangel and Balladeer for your kind comments! They mean so much to me! Denise |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow Denise, this is gorgeous! Wonderful wonderful work! ~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~ [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 12-17-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Krista, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The time certainly does fly don't it? Every year seems a little quicker, wonder why that is? Just lovely Denise! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
wonderful |
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