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My Lady
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I love my Lady for her gentle praise. Her compassion shines through in all she does. She lifts me up when my conscience weighs. My Lady sees me not what I once was. Only she sees the truth behind my mask. Her words soothe both my Beast and inner child. I would save the world if she did but ask. Her feminine wiles have kept me beguiled. Of female virtue is she paradigm. Her quiet voice woke my sleeping reason. She is the height I aspire to climb. I love her more with each passing season. Her mercurial moods are my delight. On angel's wings does our love take flight. ©1999 DreamEvil Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! Very lovely poem! Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
A lovely tribute to a lovely lady (I am sure). Good work my friend. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Another romantic one Dream....I like  |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
"Her mercurial moods are my delight" How apt -- few people would claim to like mercurial moods, but I have the feeling you are quite sincere. Apparently the two of you are made for each other ...  ...and if you tell me that this was another of your poetic exercises, and not truly a tribute to your Lady, I'll ... well, I'll be very upset!! --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dream - this is a dream of a poem... My friend, your lady is blessed. K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh! Soul-Brother, This is so beautiful, absolutley beautiful!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
a wonderful testimony to love to wake up to read! thanks so much... *sigh* ahhhhh, love! I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Dream, this is exquisitely beautiful....How I do admire your soft and romantic side, as oppose to your being forlorn. Although, I know that all your emotions make up who you are, and I do admire you, and your expression in your writing. You truly have a gift, and I want to say that I hope your holidays are filled with cheer, and happiness. I will continue to read on...as you have shared many works with us of late! - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of your better pieces, DE, thank you! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nice dream another winner yuh |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Delight for the eyes, the heart and the soul! Your latest poems are wonderful, Scott!  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a lovely tribute, DreamEvivl! I enjoyed reading it as I am sure your Lady did. Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I need to write a whole lot more sonnets to catch up to Willie, but I am working on it. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Eloquent, my friend. Had me thinking of Genny the whole way through. Beautiful. Michael |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
"She lifts me up when my conscience weighs." Love and long for this my friend! |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
It is a truly beautiful poem Dream. It is nice to see your romantic side come out. Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light |
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
You are a lucky man. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is absolutely beautiful, Scott....this is one of your very best. I especially liked "Her words soothe both my Beast and inner child." |
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