Open Poetry #4 |
The Hardest Thing |
UNLOVED-1 Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 16dominican republic |
"THE HARDEST THING" The hardest thing i've had to do. Is lie and tell myself i don't love you. It's looking you in the eyes. And saying good-bye. It's looking at your picture everyday. And knowing that you're so far away. It's hard knowing that your letters weren't true. And trying to figure out why i still love you. The hardest thing is saying that it was really a game. When in my heart i know that i loved you in every way. It's hard letting you free. Knowing you deserve better than me. Knowing we weren't meant to be. And knowing you were just a fantasy. otis omar |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I like this. It brings out both the true love of accepting, as well as the hurt of our dashed dream. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Unloved: Oh that's such a sad name goes with the sad poem.. Big HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The mind can only know the things that the heart never hears. . . Heartfelt words, my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Heartfelt words indeed- K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Any kind of lie is difficult. But those to yourself are the worst.But the truth can sometimes be hard to bear. This is so sad a poem. But well stated. Liz |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Oh, so sad, but so true to its words. Such a perfect title also for a such a heartfelt and wonderful poem. I feel as though I can relate, thanx for the great read Unloved... If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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