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Another Romantic Rambling
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Another Romantic Rambling |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Lunatic that is what I am moon-drunk on Dionysus heady brew flowing through my veins pounding my heart with unknown vigor that feeds sweet Aphrodite's gracious gift: true love My Lady is beyond compare for comparison would be unjust as it would serve but to show as glaring flaws the imperfection in those at her side for to mine own eye her beauty far outshines any rival sun for she is the brightest of stars in my night To think her eyes those twins suns blazing with vital life might dim with pain is more than my hold upon control to bear for Honor, Duty, Chivalry all demand from me obeisance but to mine own heart will I be true and thus do I choose the comfort of my Lady over mine own tarnished nature Words I say are insufficient to the task lack they the depth of feeling and resolve the voice conveys, oh the symphonies that play upon her golden tongue reach mine ears and fair swoon me with tantalizing images of her by firelight as our lips touch in a kiss ©1999 DreamEvil Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Surprise surprise 'tis I! Delicate, yet shows the hidden darkness, dark one. Your words are beautiful under that half-light.  K |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ramble on romantic lunatic ! If this is rambling ... take us further. Really like it, DreamEvil. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Dream: I really do love this romantic side of you.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh you do do romance well Scott I like this and it likes me very well |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DE, You must be part Irish? This comes under the heading Of pure blarney, but you did a great job. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you for the replies. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ah.....this is beautiful, would that someone would love me like this and write love poems.....she is lucky ....so are you |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Of all of your poetry that I love...this will definitely be in the list of my very favorite ones, Dream. It is wonderful, my dear. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! Your style is definitely changing.. I like this very much!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Brother, you never "ramble." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Such a beautiful tribute to your love...I really enjoyed reading this DE.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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