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The poets poem
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The poets poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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This is a rewrite. The poets poem Each poet writes between the bind. Their innuendos for our mind. They launch them with a tender flair, With phantom strings that hold them there. Amongst the flowers of their poem, Are secret fears that will not comb. Hidden under shadowed sheath, Secluded in a secret wreath. They drain their souls in self embroil, Weary themselves in sweat and toil. Hide each gem in self deny, With colors of a butterfly. Then hold their breath for one to read, The vail of message they have seed, Amongst the offer of their tea. And pray to God in true you see. So if you read a poets poem, Search carefully what they has sown. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm sure I remember this, Sy. Marvellous - draining the soul indeed. I wonder where I dredge my words from sometimes! And I also wonder - would we be true poets without ears to hear our songs? (And I have searched carefully and seen one little has that should be a have... *twinkle*) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very nice....I love the choice of words you have used  Share what you are for you are what you share |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: Sometimes, your honesty with words gets inside of me and I think you know when I talk, exactly what I mean... HUGS Poet! Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent as usual, Seymour! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Whatever seed that you have sown Is many times to me unknown For I am usually swept, you see By the beauty of your poetry And fail to realize or find A meaning of which I'm total blind So I'll continue as such reading your poetry And hope that God decifers for me This poem is beautiful As is all of your work Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour, this is wonderful!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm sitting here reading through some of my grandmother's work, understanding exactly what you're saying here, Sy....Nice work... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely said |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am so very glad the poets here take time to repost their favorites for some of us miss them the first time around... and Sy, you repost so very well... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-14-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, excellent, really like this.....sigh so perfectly captured |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A sigh for Sy. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people above, my machine is so slow it would take me all day to answer each of you so I'll say a huge thank you and love you all. SY |
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