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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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I’m shocked, appalled. You’re ashamed of me! That unwanted knowledge makes me bleed, Peels away my skin, sears screaming nerves. I’m desolate, wishing I had worth. So much for my dreams - there’s nothing left. I’m here alone - bewildered, bereft. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
gosh suthern, your words are so powerful, can actually "feel" them......"that unwanted knowledge"......whew.....and nope *shakes her head* you are wonderful......am with rainbow on this one.......big big hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, dear friends! (I'm gonna need some powerful running shoes if You Know Who peeks in here to find today's melancholy mopings... or I'll be feeling his wrath! *G*) |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
WOW !! Striking stuff Auntie !! ... and you know what, *they* should be ashamed of themselves ... and they're not worth it ... a French smooch for a great lady ...  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Who doesn't realize what? What realization? what does this imply? Who what where?....You'll realize something soon if ya don't answer the damn emails!!! And JTF...nobody's worth it for sure my old friend that doesn't write anymore....LOL |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rejection is the greatest pain one can endure, but it doesn't diminish your worth in the least. Liz |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
What is left if someone you thought was close is ashamed of you? JOY |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oooops... *G* Toe, you were supposed to be busy today so I could sneak in some of my "I feel sorry for me" poems! LOL I have them in great quantities! Thank you JTF, Elizabeth, and Joy! And Toe... emails are answered... SMOOCH! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I 'echo' the hugs! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmn, that you know who must have been...ah, um, could it be Toe? hehe Suthern are you feeling like this today? Who ever tells you those things don't listen to em. I for one know you to be a wonderful person! I am not ashamed of you! ~HUGS~< !signature--> <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 12-14-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ouch! This is loaded with pain! Don't worry, Suthern, we all love ya! To heck with them!  Denise |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
What is left if someone Close to you bemoans Your worth and value, In their eyes alone. Dont pay attention, dear one For you'll change if you need to Kindly ask them exactly why and then listen of tell them to GO TO HELL |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
GEESH!!!!Here's a hug  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
You're worth lots to us! Anyone who says different might have to fight over it...I'm not so far from Louisiana, ya know! I'd just have to come over there and show 'em who is worthless!  (((((HUGS))))) You say a lot in a few words, Suthern. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all for the caring and hugs... and special thanks to Cuddlez for the wonderful poem and Nan for the bear hugs. *G* You don't know how much all of you mean to me or how much I appreciate you! But to answer WhtDove... no, that's not how I feel today. I won't deny they're my feelings or that such realization hurt like hell so that even the memory brings tears... they're just not my present feelings. *S* I have poems and pieces of poems from times when writing helped me hold onto my sanity (limited as the supply was *G*) And most times, I don't post such poems because I don't want anyone thinking they're about that finest man who ever lived Toerag... and because he doesn't like my gloomy poems and I strive to please! *G* But sometimes... they clamor for their turn. Thank you all very much for being so kind to my poem... and even more for the kindness and friendship you've given me. And caroline... I may take you up on that offer! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 12-14-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG@limited as the supply was.... ok, just had to get that out of the way, and yep, really appreciate your comments suthern, sometimes poems are current and sometimes not, but the pain still comes through and hugs are always nice.... big hugs and smiles for your day |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Big Hugs my friend........I feel your pain. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I'm glad to hear you are not feeling this way now suthern....but I'm sorry that you ever had to deal with that painful situation sending more Hugs.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Like the song goes, "I can't give you anything but *L* baby. |
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