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Djaj
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since 1999-12-12

Posts 7

0 posted 1999-12-12 08:39 PM

(this is a poem for a girl who has stolen my heart...A heart that I really thought was totally dead.The peom is a little corny but I was also trying to make her laugh)

Dear Natalie sweet Natalie
With stars in her eyes
Is she really Miss Untouchable
Or is it just a disguise

A princess she is
With a loving heart so fair
A knockout smile
To match her long flowing hair

Taken me back
This girl of my dreams
She is an absolute wonder
Or so may it seem

For she has stolen
What I thought was deceased
My longing heart
Has finally found pease

I thankyou for that
And for so much more
And one day Yes
I’ll carry you across that door

Yes I’m a dork
And slightly mis lead
Perhaps it has something
To do with my head

I bid you farewell
But never goodbye
For we shall be close
Till both of us die

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-12 08:43 PM

Welcome to Passions, Djaj! This is not corny, it its very sweet!

Denise

Beri
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 149

2 posted 1999-12-12 10:06 PM

Welcome to passions!!!! And by the way, I thought this was so sweet also!! Not corny... I loved it.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-12-12 10:48 PM

Welcome to the family! This is not corny at all...I'm sure she loved it! It made me smile too!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-12-12 11:06 PM

Well, no dork wrote this! Welcome.

Djaj
New Member

since 1999-12-12

Posts 7

5 posted 1999-12-12 11:20 PM

Thanks guys for your kind words...Nice to be on the team...

I just hope Natalie will appreciate this...

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-12-13 12:49 PM

WELCOME!!! I thought this was very sweet, and I'm sure she'll love it, and have a big grin on her face!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-12-13 02:25 AM

Hardly a dork!
This is great - and she will more than appreciate I'm sure.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-12-13 05:37 AM

Djaj, this is so very sweet, I am sure she will love it. Well Done

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 1999-12-13 09:47 AM

Welcome to passions

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 1999-12-13 09:52 AM

Djaj,
Welcome and I like corn.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 1999-12-14 08:36 AM

She'll love it!!! *G* Welcome!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

12 posted 1999-12-14 08:42 AM

Keep them coming. We like poems about love.
Liz

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

13 posted 1999-12-14 04:39 PM

Such a sweet poem..

Welcome to Passions Djaj!!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 1999-12-14 04:52 PM

Excellent!! From the heart. . . that makes the best kind of poetry. . . continue to write like this and you will indeed win her heart. . . if you have not already. . .

You are beginning to find your voice, I hope that we can help you to do so. ..

Welcome, my friend. ..

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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