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Jayden
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since 1999-12-13
Posts 5
Canada

0 posted 1999-12-13 03:27 PM


                        HIM
I found him,
Cute, smart, sexy and funny..
Glad he's all ine to call 'honey.'

I found him,
And I knew that first night..
There's something about him,
Lust at first sight?

I found him,
And there is so much I want to know..
Want to know when he's happy,
And even when he's low.

I found him,
And although he's so far away..
Missing him so much,
Makes reuniting such a special day.

I found him,
And the sex is far better than I could have wished..
Love how he inspects every part of my body,
As I tingle in every place he's kissed.

I found him,
And I'm finally starting to feel whole..
Want him to know,
I'm all his,
Body, Heart, and Soul.

Deborah Lee

© Copyright 1999 Deborah Lee - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 1999-12-13 03:30 PM


Deborah, this is a lovely poem.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-13 09:31 PM


Deborah welcome to Passions!  This is a beautiful poem!  Thank you for sharing withus and I hoep to read more from you soon!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~



suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 1999-12-14 08:34 AM


Welcome!! Thanks for sharing your poem... we'll look forward to seeing more!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-12-14 10:49 AM


Lucky You  
Welcome to passions!!

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-12-14 04:30 PM


Echoing the welcomes, Jayden.  
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 1999-12-14 04:50 PM


Very good. . . lucky you. . .and lucky him!

I eagerly await more!!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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