Open Poetry #4 |
The Wedding Album |
Denise
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Preserved in time eternally < !signature-->Pure unabashed expectancy Those sacred vows sealed with a kiss Bright smiling eyes that speak true bliss Two loving hearts beat now as one From this day on 'till life is done Come dreams fulfilled or not to be Love's captured there - exquisitely. Now one last shot - sheer revelry The shutter frames infinity As past and future share a dance As present sweethearts take a chance. Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-12-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
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Gorgeous, gorgeous - such were the images I saw! Well done S.P K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwwwww ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's so easy to get lost in the promise of a picture--and sad that time changes and people move on, sometimes in different directions. I loved the last stanza--all of it. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful work Denise, but so often those sacred vows and promises are broken The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is pure poetry, Denise. Lovely. |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, my friend! I do enjoy paging through the album of your poetry. Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Beautiful Denise! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Denise
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Severn, Marge, Martie, Isis, Balladeer, Elizabeth and Rebecca! I'm so glad you liked it! (I just love this little smiley guy!) Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise, I do hope you gave this to her, this would be beautiful right on the very front page of their wedding alblum. Wonderful works my friend |
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Denise
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....hehehehe, great minds think alike! My plans exactly! Thanks, Ruth! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is absolutely beautiful Denise. I'm sure the wedding was inspiration for this. |
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Denise
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Thank you Eloise! Yes it was! Very inspiring! Both weddings. My youngest daughter was married last May and my oldest daughter was married last week! I am going to put this in both their wedding albums! And I'm really glad all the weddings are over with for me! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
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Pure sweetness........ Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Denise
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Thank you, First Knight! Glad you liked it! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
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Exquisite Denise. One week and counting here... |
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Denise
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Thank you, Mike! I feel for you! But I'm sure it will be a lovely affair! Good luck! Denise |
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Djaj New Member
since 1999-12-12
Posts 7 |
Denise - That was beautiful...I think I have some goosebumps on my arms and maybe some tears welling.... Andrew |
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Denise
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Thank you so much Andrew! Sorry I didn't thank you earlier, I just found this now! Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
awwwwww Denise, how in the world did I miss this?? It's lovely!! Gee I'm glad you had a missed reply. |
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Denise
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Thanks so much, Sally! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Fantasmic!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely...simply lovely!! So where's the pictures Denise? A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Thank you Nan and Pepper! I'm grateful for your read and comments! Pictures...have I got pictures! And now I have a scanner too! I'll send you one via email! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how precious |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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