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Mark R.
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since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

0 posted 1999-12-20 03:28 PM

Is it true,
That my every breath draws from you.
Can it be,
That your beautiful smile is all I ever wish to see.

Can you deny,
That to your every whimper, I would reply.
Can you confess,
That it's because of you, I find my heart in complete duress.

Is it true,
That I wish to be with you through and through.
Can it be,
That it's your warm embrace I wish to feel around me.

Can you deny,
That whatever you ask of me, I never ask you how or why.
Can you confess,
That you're aware, I can't live without your soft caress.

So tell me,
Is it true? Can it be?
That what I long for is within you and me.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-12-20 03:31 PM

Oh, my! Lovely poem..simply lovely! I like this a lot!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 1999-12-20 04:03 PM

"Into the heart of every man, the soul speaks through his poetry...yours spoke well to my soul"

Very romantic and beautiful!

"Unto every life, A little love must fall!"

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 1999-12-20 04:14 PM

Been gone for about a week and there is so much to catch up on, but I must say that as my first read back yours was a pleasure. I like the style, which is different from most here in PIP and I just enjoyed it overall. Thanks for shaing.

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

4 posted 1999-12-26 08:55 PM

Thank you everyone. I, myself, have been gone for over a month, and to be able to come back, write something and get such a response as I have is nothing less than wonderful. You all have my greatest of gratitude. Thank you again, and have an spectacular new year....

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-26 09:03 PM

Yes, I agree, this is beautiful, Mark!

Denise

jascanvey
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 130
England

6 posted 1999-12-27 05:30 PM

A lovely poem.
Oh, to find a man who feels so much.....!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

7 posted 2005-04-15 03:03 AM

glad I found this back here in the archives

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-11-12 04:13 PM

This is so beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

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