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Mark R.
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since 1999-06-25
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San Francisco, CA.

0 posted 1999-12-20 03:28 PM



Is it true,
That my every breath draws from you.
Can it be,
That your beautiful smile is all I ever wish to see.

Can you deny,
That to your every whimper, I would reply.
Can you confess,
That it's because of you, I find my heart in complete duress.

Is it true,
That I wish to be with you through and through.
Can it be,
That it's your warm embrace I wish to feel around me.

Can you deny,
That whatever you ask of me, I never ask you how or why.
Can you confess,
That you're aware, I can't live without your soft caress.

So tell me,
Is it true?  Can it be?
That what I long for is within you and me.

© Copyright 1999 Mark R. - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-12-20 03:31 PM


Oh, my! Lovely poem..simply lovely! I like this a lot!  

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 1999-12-20 04:03 PM


"Into the heart of every man, the soul speaks through his poetry...yours spoke well to my soul"  

Very romantic and beautiful!


 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"


Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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3 posted 1999-12-20 04:14 PM


Been gone for about a week and there is so much to catch up on, but I must say that as my first read back yours was a pleasure.  I like the style, which is different from most here in PIP and I just enjoyed it overall.  Thanks for shaing.
Mark R.
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.
4 posted 1999-12-26 08:55 PM


Thank you everyone.  I, myself, have been gone for over a month, and to be able to come back, write something and get such a response as I have is nothing less than wonderful.  You all have my greatest of gratitude.  Thank you again, and have an spectacular new year....
Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-26 09:03 PM


Yes, I agree, this is beautiful, Mark!  

 Denise



jascanvey
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6 posted 1999-12-27 05:30 PM


A lovely poem.
Oh, to find a man who feels so much.....!!!

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-04-15 03:03 AM


glad I found this back here in the archives
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-11-12 04:13 PM


This is so beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

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