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Open Poetry #4

I've lost you

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 1999-12-11 07:26 PM

I've watched my innocence slip away
The memories holding tight
Each day moves by, each stocking hung
Reminding me in hindsight

I wonder how it happened, when
Before I saw some light
I only know that now I see
My lonliness at night

I want to feel the presence of
My soulmate at my side
A person who will stay with me
No matter how the tides

My sadness fills the hours of
The day and night that comes
I only hope to find myself
And show you of my love

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 1999-12-11 07:28 PM

A wonderful wish, I think.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-11 08:16 PM

Very sad, yet beautiful. I like this Tulip!

Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-11 08:54 PM

Whimsical and melancholy - lovely writing.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

4 posted 1999-12-11 09:01 PM

Thanks you guys. It helps to know you enjoyed it!

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