Open Poetry #4 |
Locket |
Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
Locket A little silver heart I hold so close to me. It's empty harbor waits for A matching silvery key. A small capsule of love, Who's center stands lonely, Waiting for his arrival- He'll be my one and only. A trinket of affection To hold the one that I love I do not know his name but He's the one I'm thinking of. Locked inside my heart always He will set my soul ablaze www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
May you find your matching key soon. Beautiful sentiment here. michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a precious hope. Nice writing. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
There's something very special about a locket,it stays close to you, right beside your heart, you may share with others, or keep your secret closed, you can open it to take a peek any time you want, you can hand it down to the next generation. I love lockets. I loved your poem |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Moonlight, very sweet! Denise |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
May you find this key and may it shine bright!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Moonlight, well done enjoyed the read. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Moonlight, knowing you before either of us came to the forums I must say that you will one day find the key you seek. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
Thank you everyone for replying. Its been a while since I've written anything because I have had so little time with my classes. But, all that work did pay off and now I'm free for a while to read and write a little bit and express a little bit of myself in words again instead of art & Design. Thanks for the hope everyone! And thanks you very much Dream. |
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