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Charm Weavers |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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Perhaps they've gone at last not to return Again to greet with kiss of fairest kind To weave their magic charms that quell the yearn That burning churn within the soul and mind. Perhaps they've gone away just as they came Clandestinely, unbidden, unannounced Their going simply may be just the same Might be they flee as fast as once they pounced. Perhaps they only visit for a spell Unwilling to be chained by time or space Alas, perhaps they cannot longer dwell Without a loss to them of fairest grace. Perhaps tomorrow we shall meet again Upon my paper flowing from my pen. Denise |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
This is really cool Denise. They bail on me from time to time too.....but they come back! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
That Muse, always running around, well written! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, They elude me to. Clever little poem. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The charm weavers abide within you, me thinks.< !signature--> In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 12-11-1999).] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it.... and I can relate all too well...  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well, Sonnet Poet  - I don't think they would be gone for long! Their elusiveness makes them all the more satisfying - wonderful words. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well done, Denise. Back they come...they always do but who knows what kind of mood they'll be in? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, You are the word weaver of the highest caliber. This is beautiful Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - LOVELY ! Captured again within the pen Colored with the poets ink to make us sigh and then to make us think ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, lostboy, Master, Seymour, Martie, Nan, Severn, Balladeer, Elizabeth and Marge for reading and commenting! And thank you, Severn, for your research! And you, Marge for the nice poem!  Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Truly enjoyed Denise. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Mike! Thank you! Getting ready for the big day? Next weekend, right? Got any money left?! hehehe  Have a great time! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise, send your muse my way dear, I could stand the inspiration "I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I've loved another with all my heart and soul, and to me , this has always been enough." ~Nicholas Sparks from The Notebook |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ruth, as soon as I find it I'll be glad to share but seems you do just fine from what I am reading! Thanks for reading mine! (I like this little smiley face so much!)Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Lovely poem. It was well-written and very fluid too. |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
lovely poem, dsynder; although I think you don't have anything to worry about!! I've just emerged from a dry spell and know while it seems eternity while you haven't anything to write, the words are out there.... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Nate Dog, and Seaangel for reading and commenting! It is appreciated very much! Denise |
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