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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Let me tell you one thing I really care for you I understand if you don't feel the same Living as we do It's hard to take my eyes off you When you're within my sight At the end of the tunnel in my mind You're the shining light What do you think of this whole deal Not quite as you'd planned If you want to take it I offer you my hand I know we can't have it now But we can still be tight And maybe someday, someway The time might then be right Every night I think of you This thought crosses my mind This is the one of who I've dreamed And my heart won't leave behind Someday, Someday love will find us Someway, Someway keep reminding us |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lostboy...You are so ROMANTIC!!!!!! Your words are beautiful, Your heart so full of love... Especially like...Every night I think of you..(The whole verse there)  Who ever she is she is blessed...To have a man as sweet and so expressive to write poems about her! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
I agree with Romantic Heart. Keep up the great work.  |
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paperguardian Junior Member
since 1999-12-07
Posts 25 |
Absolutely breathtaking!!! Of course I'm biased because I lived through your poem... and my someday showed up just a few months ago.  Incredible work lostboy! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
You are right. Someday, someway love will find us. The one you have your eye on is a blessed soul indeed. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Romantic Heart, thank you my dear, your words are inspiration in themselves. I'm glad you liked this one. Dolphins and guardian, I appreciate your responses, they mean so much |
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sraet Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 31 |
"It's hard to take my eyes off you When you're within my sight" Don't you just love it when you have someone like that in your life? (even if you can only look at them) Very nice, I always enjoy your posts. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is beautiful lostboy! Very nice! Denise |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
sraet and Denise, my friend, how nice of you to say. Hope you're enjoying the weekend, I'm working through it(UGH!) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lostboy, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Glad you enjoyed Sy danni, so sorry I missed you earlier, I scrolled too fast, thank you my friend, someday, yeah! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostBoy -  Lost in these beautiful phrases, I am.Keep your heart and eyes focused and she will appear like magic. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So lovely love and sad. You said it well. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LB - this is sweetly sad. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Sweet and romantic....I enjoyed this much  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Eboni Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 17Texas |
I really enjoyed reading this poem.I can only wish someday I would be as lucky as she to have a sweetie like you. Eboni Banks |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
You are all so sweet, I appreciate the responses! Hugs to ya!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful words and with a heart like yours, you won't be lost for long |
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