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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 1999-12-11 02:12 PM

Juxtaposed
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Of love we spoke
on lovers peak.
You gave me the perfect rose.
Long before our love did meet
our hearts were juxtaposed.

Of thoughts and dreams
my mind did scheme,
to think of things so grand.
You gave me the perfect rose
and then you took my hand.

On lovers peak
of love we spoke.
You gave me the perfect rose.
Long after the moment of reckoning
our hearts were juxtaposed.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-11 02:20 PM

Beautiful, Marge! Simply beautiful!

Denise

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 1999-12-11 02:22 PM

And you gave us the perfect poem. Very nice Marge!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-12-11 03:45 PM

Marge,
Clever and well done.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-12-11 04:05 PM

I'm out of roses, Marge, but I would gladly give my tulips!

Beautiful poem, btw.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-12-11 04:54 PM

This one I find likes me well.< !signature-->

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-11-1999).]

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

6 posted 1999-12-11 04:57 PM

Short but very sweet. This is beautiful...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-12-11 05:40 PM

Charming work, Marge.

K

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 1999-12-11 06:32 PM

Denise - Muchly, I thank you.
LostBoy - I'm soooo glad you think so.
Seymour - My thanks to you.
Balladeer - DEAL !
DreamEvil - Glad to be liked.
RSEvans - Many thanks.
Severn - You are a busy gal. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

9 posted 1999-12-11 06:46 PM

Marge,
You're on a roll!
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 1999-12-12 05:06 AM

I like that word and this poem

Rod
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 149
Auckland New Zealand

11 posted 1999-12-12 05:21 AM

Absolutely enchanting Marge
Enjoyed it immensely!
Well done.

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

12 posted 1999-12-12 06:40 AM

Charming Marge as always....simple and charming

Share what you are for you are what you share

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 1999-12-12 10:16 AM

Elizabeth -
My friend ... thank you.

Hoot -
Yeah, isn't it a neat word? Glad you liked.

Rod -
Thank you, I enjoyed doing it.
Glad you found it 'enchanting'.

First_Knight -
I am pleased that you found it 'charming'.
Thank you.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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