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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-11 11:21 AM


I can't sleep at night,
Everyday,I think of you,
I stare at your picture,
I wonder what you're doinng,
When you're not with me,
Hope you you're thinking of me too,
I miss you so much,
When I tried to do every thing by myself,
I cried and wake up all night,
I think of those days of love ,
The past in my mind,
As the wind blows,
I lose my control,
Wish you were here,
To hold me tight,
It's too hard to think about you,
Everyday,I lose my mind,
I haven't slept for lonely days without you,
When you're not around here,
I lose my control,
God knows what makes me to losr you,
God knows what takes me to cry,
Pray every night,
Wish you would come and hold me tight,




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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
1 posted 1999-12-11 01:18 PM


Perhaps you will get your wish!!!
lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 1999-12-11 01:20 PM


Hoping all your Christmas wishes come true vandana!

[This message has been edited by lostboy (edited 12-11-1999).]

Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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3 posted 1999-12-11 05:49 PM


I feel like you took a peek at my diary for this one! good job in expression

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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