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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-11 05:22 PM


Once again sitting silience,
The emptynees inside of me,
I don't wanna to cry,
Everyday and night,
I used to keep our love alive,
But love won't stay alive,
But love won't stay for us,
You need to take me to your arms,
I want you to take me back to yesterday,It's difference than last time,
To love you,
I gave you my heart and soul,
But still I find my heart empty inside of me,
There's something missing between our love,
We can bring that love back I f we want too,
You've change me,dear,
You don't know,
How I feel inside me,
I can't close my eyes,
If I close my eyes,
I see you standing there,
With your arms open,
But love won't stay that long,
Since we broke up,
We don't fee the same,
When we meet again,
I can't take it anymore,
I can't make myself happy now,
I keep my hearyt happy,
When I'm in mood ,
But then I realise my heart is empty without love


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Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-12-11 05:57 PM


Love is like breathing...you can't stop and expect to live long. There are so many things in this world to love...something will soon find it's way into your heart.

P.S--a small typo on heart near the end.
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 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                      
                                 -Charles Brugnot



[This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 12-11-1999).]

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