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Till the Break of Day
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Till the Break of Day |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Till the Break of Day The whistling sound of the wind Takes me back to that night To that night when we had sinned Underneath the great starlight. Oh! The guilt that I had felt When my heart you did melt Take me there once again I want to feel like I did then. How you took me to great heights Tempting me with such delights Please take me back to that night When everything felt so right. Love me till the break of day As the whistling wind fades away. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is beautiful DA....!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel - Very nice indeed. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Pepper and Marge, thank you both so very much  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This has a controlled urgency to it that makes it very appealing. Good work, angel. To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is very good. The last line gave me chills!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Balladeer, Thank you so very much Handsome -------------- PDV, I'm glad you like it, Thank you! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
My my - this is a charm. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WooHoo girl! Way to go! Very, very good! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This is an excellent verse soul-sib. Your writing skills progress well. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Soul-Brother *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
With words this strong how could any man wait till the break of day....Hehe Very beautiful. Share what you are for you are what you share |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, this one definately rocks my friend |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Love this one Dark Angel "Tempting me with such delights" Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth and Jenny, It makes me happy to know you ladies liked it, thank you. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
This poem is awesome DA - well done! HUggs....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks again Moonshine What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sweet! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Really liked this Maree. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I was down here reading Martie and thought of you (that is a compliment.) Shame we can't ever turn back the pages isn't it? A weenie up the pole for ya 'cause I can and will! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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