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Open Poetry #4

creeping castles

paperguardian
Junior Member

since 1999-12-07

Posts 25

0 posted 1999-12-10 09:41 PM

In quiet havens
have I sought you,
    (as a mind will be drawn to a knot
     in the labor of pull and tug)
and always lounging about
on some lesser thought
you would address me.

Talking to me of love
of poetics
in margins of metaphors -
forever indulging
then barging
through my ideality
      (as though you own the place...)

And yes I can say
you have purchased the night sky -
brought it down upon your eyes
bidding me to gaze
then wish on the stars I see there

this
now
and ever again
will
I love you
for the dreamer has awakened.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-12-10 10:36 PM

This is very well done, guardian.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-10 10:37 PM

Simply Beautiful!

Denise

SeaDragon
Junior Member

since 1999-12-11

Posts 11

3 posted 1999-12-11 02:09 AM

I remember when I first learned that stars are dust. We are forever dreaming and waking up. Souls are less predictable than stars, and perhaps more beautiful for being unexpected.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-12-11 02:15 AM

Wonderful words wrapped in a wonderful style.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-12-12 11:30 AM

Very well written

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