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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Forevermore!! I know we'll be forever It's so natural to love you One day we'll be together For our hearts beat so true Although you are so very far We are always side by side Our beating hearts never apart. While our Spirits swiftly soar Over the great blue Oceans Over a many roaring shore To express our emotions In precious love forevermore. I see your sweet angelic face And the sparkle in your eye Your graceful, heavenly smile In the corner of my minds eye. I feel you at night as I sleep Your breath against my flesh Overwhelmed I begin to weep Our hearts, will be but one heart Until once more our spirits soar And death will do us part. And again we shall meet one day Because our hearts beat as one In each other's arms we shall lay Underneath the Eternal Sun! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A wonderful promise of love! Good one DA!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Gorgeous - This is written by an angel of light. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*sigh* I'm love sick...how about you? "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA it's nice to see you post again! It's nice to see that your work is more upbeat from the past. Glad things are looking up for ya Hon! ~HUGS~ <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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seti@home Junior Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 24 |
I wish my heart could say the same keep it coming my friend |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ain' love grand?????  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
So lovely! I'm glad your heart is feeling this You need to post more...I love your poetry, my friend  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Dark Angel. Simply beautiful! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
sighs............oh, I like this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well what can I say? Thank you all so very much for your kind and lovely comments They mean so much to me.What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Simply marvelous verse you have here soul-sib. It is indeed breathtaking. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, Thank you so much, your comments always mean so much. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem, Dark Angel. A very moving and special piece. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Michael, Thank you so much for your lovely comment, much appreciated. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I echo Severn DA....Gorgeous One for my favorite files.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Pepper, Thank you so much, you are so kind. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is very lovely, and reflects the poet Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DA, Agree with Liz, enjoyed. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ellizabeth and Seymour, Thank you both so very much. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DA this is beautiful - your writing is awesome! Well done! HUggs....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, Thanks so much Hon What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
Graphic and heartfelt Well done! Really enjoyed it - thank you. |
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